Loved it.
It was fantastic, I really feel for you, but this was an awesome piece of work.
Congrats, but remember, live life for you.

Oh my gosh i love this all the metaphors are brilliant and thats exactly how i always feel about my value in the world! i especially like the pencil mark metaphor - not sure exactly why, but its definitely very original.

Just reread this
still love it, thank you.

just too beautiful.! I can see my thoughts in this poem. 10/10