It's really great poem...
I think everything is alright, nothing to complain...
Great job!!!
5/5 for sure

That is really a good poem
You've written about some of the things ive been through or going through.. It good 5/5

Great feeling and i know everybody commented the same thing but i know how you feel wishing you could get back the time you lost to depression and addiction and knowing you cant and having to over come it but on a good note keep up the good work

That was really good I remember once feeling the same way. When I was your age I wasn't sure how to put the chaos in my head into words and even now that i dont feel that way anymore your poem hit a spot that i could never explain very good job! 5/5