Wow... I love it, truly, truly love it! Absolutely breathtaking from the beginning to the end, filled with captivating descriptions. You created superb atmosphere through the piece. Whole poem is excellently written. The ending rounds up whole piece and it is very effective.
My favorite stanza is;

-My hands can not keep from the tides,
an ocean lit by a red, fervent moon
eyes that outshine the brilliance of night.-
^^^
Amazing imagery

Excellently done!

A truly stirring tribute...

"Her lips make my breath slip from this broken galaxy,"....I really know this one....

How are you!