Wow...
This is amazing and truly, truly powerful! I like this piece from the beginning to the end. It is deep and excellently written. I like the topic that you picked and your choice of words through the whole poem.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Great work
i liekd the illusion it depicted.
keep it up,im sure u'll get very far in thissite.
great work once again.
Take care
-Lisa