Comments : My past.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Thats so sweet. I loved how it was sort of casual, yet still beautifully written. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    So I liked the poem itself.
    But the structure was really off.
    I think if you organized your writing a bit
    You'd find out that it actually improves the way your poem sounds
    4/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    There are alot of things in my past that I'd like to forget. But your past makes you who you are. Good poem.