That's a really good poem even though you didn't go through it.. my favorite part was..

My memory floods in.. every time I slip and fall.

This poem probably means more to me than you know.. thank you.. 5/5

Means a lot that you're writing for the sake of others.

This is such a beautiful poem, it was filled with depression/ tears/ hurt and harsh words. you have done a great job. your sentences and words were very strong and profound. you are a very good poet, and a very deep writer.

take care
-Sarah A.

You are truly an amazing poet! the only thing is i suggest that u should not make a poem that only reflects the pain of such an abomination but reflect the beauty from the ashes. dont write one that simply speaks of death and saddness, but remember God IS on His Throne forever! He (the rapist might burn in hell unless He asks for forgiveness) is wrong for such things but does deserve forgiveness just as much as the next man. if all u present to the world as a poet is just sadness, u are a failure. "He who does not contain light in his heart is never truly alive".

Its very good i liek the ending, very good xxxxxx