Comments : Autumn

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love this piece.
    Beautiful poem, so descriptive and truly greatly written. I like vivid imagery that you created. Every stanza is fantastic. You did good job with rhymes, too, creating flawless flow from the beginning to the end.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Radiant leaves skipping across the wind,
    stopping to make love with my hair,
    passionately intertwining each blond strand,
    with the richly seasoned air.-

    Original and very captivating piece.
    Keep writing!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Definitely love this one. The flow and rhyming is great. Thank you for the comment. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Nice work,

    Autumn is my favorite season here in CO.