Comments : Forbidden love

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Nice message you didn't hold back i like this one and its very real, emotion is visible. great job!!! 5/5

    Hell

  • 16 years ago

    by Cale

    I like this one really good job

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    I can feel your pain and the despair and hopelessnes of your situation when i read it. you really spill your heart out in this poem. excellent poem. the person you talking bout is he a friend of some sort?

  • 16 years ago

    by christina

    This poem is so good!
    this poem happens to explain whats kinda going on with me right now

  • I can relate to this alot good job 5/5