Wow. It's long, but quite amazing, darling. A few grammical errors and punctuation - but a look over shall help that. (:

WOW. I loved all the poems I've read, but this one is by far the best one! I liked everything about it starting with the language. It was just excellent. There were a few errors, but it was still beautifully written. Excellente! =}
5/5

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