Wow love it and i so know how you feel...i feel the same, but the person who's mad at me lives like 1000 miles away...sucks!=(
But great job!

Thats good. your speaking from your heart that is touching.

This poem I didn't like as much as your other. No particular reason, perhaps it was that when you asked for forgiveness it didn't seem like it was sincerely wanted. Regardless of that it was an okay poem.

Hi! I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Your words create such strong emotions, but I felt they could become even more powerful with visuals.

I’m a freelance artist with 3 years of experience, and I can turn the feelings and imagery in your poems into illustrations so readers can actually see the words come to life. We could even start with one poem or a few stanzas as a small project.

I’d also love to share a few ideas on how visuals could help you reach a wider audience and create another way to benefit from your poetry.

If you’re interested, feel free to reach me here:

llunarlibrary@gmail.com
Instagram: @lunaartsoul

Warm Regards,
LunarLibrary