Wow love it and i so know how you feel...i feel the same, but the person who's mad at me lives like 1000 miles away...sucks!=(
But great job!

Thats good. your speaking from your heart that is touching.

This poem I didn't like as much as your other. No particular reason, perhaps it was that when you asked for forgiveness it didn't seem like it was sincerely wanted. Regardless of that it was an okay poem.