Comments : Her heart

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    Wow this was emotional honestly.
    i really like this one alot, you wrote it so well.
    its kinda sad how guys don't seem to care.
    and you go with knowing why not and things,
    happen like this you know. Very well done.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The emotions in here were real and the whole poem was heartbreakingly beautiful. Well done *5/5*