What a heartbreakin poem of a lost love.

"So Alone forever I will break, Cozy you two, together, will thrive"

^That line just stuck out to me throughout your whole piece because it just broke my heart and this flowed right off the tongue with such ease. The realty behind these words stung and lingered even after I read the piece.

The imagery was flawless here and you described your emotions nicely. I could really feel what you were saying with shows this came straight from your heart. Well done ... I really enjoyed this sad piece. *5/5*

Powerful, Passionate, Gripping, Touching,
excellent.

Pour another drink in hopes of drowning my sorrow
Instead I pass out, so another day I will borrow

I love how you say borrow. It is like you aren't really living, you are just there in the physical sense but nothing else