Comments : Better Now

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwz i liked it, it was cute...and very well written i loved the flow of it!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This one is touching as well.
    a lot of emoiton.
    and there's some flow here and there.
    and i like that. :]
    it'z nice. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow very short but very good....it showed great emotion....

    Your mistakes used to haunt you,
    In any way that it could.
    Since you've been here with me,
    The life you had doesn't matter anymore.

    i rele liiked that part it said pretty much that wat happened b4 u and me it doesnt matter no more!!! idk y but i just thot that was a rele great part in the poem!!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    This poem reminds me of me and my [ex] bestfriend.......

    Great poem.... Nice stanza's and pretty good wording too!!!

    COuld you check out my new poem
    "You're Just Playing Your Game."
    Tnx :] xx

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    GREAT POEM BABY!

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Another really good write the message in it was so strong i really liked this one another 5/5 keep writing.

    Hell

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    This is meaningful, and I loved everyword I read in it. Your friend is ver lucky :)