Wow...
This is completely mind-blowing, endlessly original and powerful. I like free form of the poem, it has some unusual and so effective rhythm that made me shiver while I was reading this. Whole idea for the poem is truly brilliant. I love it from the beginning to the end and I can't chose my favorite part: Every stanza is superbly written and equally great. This is one of my favorites from you. Effective from the first to the last line, very creative and deep. There are so many hidden meanings behind your captivating descriptions and I admire metaphoric content of this poem. You should be truly proud.
Keep writing, you truly have a way with words!

WOW THAT FORMAT WAS AMAZING AND VERY UNIQUE I LOVED IT 5/5 .