Nice poem.For the title what about something simple like "remembering you"? I thought you used "remember" too many times but its alright.I would give this poem a 4/5.Maybe try to make it more origanal.I've heard alot of the lines in other poems.
Keep writing,
Rado

I really like your poem. you could title it "memeries". i would rate your poem at a 5 b/c it sound got and it does suck to love someone but they don't love you back. but u just have ot hold on and think that there is other guys out there.

Thanks guys