Awehh..that's really good..and soo nice..this girl must be really important to you..=[..I love it. <3 =] grrreeeaaattt job!

Awww cale i love this one,
you always express your emtoin so strong its breath taking honestly this is really good, work on the flow a bit ut other then that its great i gave it a 5/5

Hell

This is a really good poem. the flow does seem to be off a bit, but other then that it is a really well written poem. 5/5

Kalee

Another amazing poem! i loved it so much. lelft me speechless. Great job.

Wow...wonderful job Cale!! I loved it! I can relate to this so much it was utterly amazing! You have improved since your last one great job!
5/5
kaila

Awwww that was so cute.
i can totally relate.
your a great writer as well!

-Brooke<3

I really like ur this girl poem...
i feel the same way except with a guy... lol...
its like hard sometimes...
when u really like someone...
u just cant stop thinking about them...
its like ur mind and ur heart are set on them..
u dont want to give up..
just hoping that u might have a chance...

XOXOXO
Britt

Hey this one is really good too! gosh...it just gets better haha! awesome job!

I liked this one...but dont sit around waiting for some one who might not want you. she might be so beautiful but you should move on or make your dreams come true dont sit waiting for a mircale{sorry i think i spelt that wrong}to happen cause you might be waiting on something that cannot happen or youll miss the best things in life but great job.....
-kortney-

Wow I like this, great job
!!!!!

Wow...just great

Okay first off, I think maybe in one of your next poems you should try to use another type of structure for your poem. The two line stanzas are kind of boring, no offence. Other than that the poem was good.