Fury and rage are intense emotions
if your writing about you then your not alone! you expressed it really well ! so nice job!

I think you have to be one of the most upfront people on this site and I like upfront people 5/5

Great job, t's short but it gets to the point
Very effective
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I like this poem keep writing. sounds very emotional. and yet it seems you being taken over. its short but sweet. what caused this monster to come out i wonder?

Wow. a wave of emotion is so powerful from this piece.....would love to know where it came from.....beautiful.

5/5-sad,but alot of feeling in a short poem, really, really good

Your not alone

Wow! Powerful piece you written here. Great imagery, awe-inspiring write as well. The words beat me deep. The last stanza was beyond belief. Good JoB!

^^5/5^^

YOu deserve it!