Wow, that was an amazing poem. i absolutely loved it.

"This kind of pain
Is one so hard to bare
I took my pain pills
But u are still there."
*a fantastic way to tie up the end, i loved it.

although i would like to suggest some things to help the poem.

"To far to go" **should read "Too far to go"

"The nose searches still stained
For the love that was made
The sent of an artwork
A bodily aid"
**the flow was thrown off, consider revising to correct the rythym.

overall i thought the poem was wonderful. great write. 5*5
Kimberly