Wow!! i love it!! it is sooo true! and i love the symbolism! this is 1 of the best i read from u! u have some major talent! keep on writing and i'll keep on reading! 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

Humm.... i dont know i ...i ... LOVE IT!! you did really well i meen that too. i have been writing poetry sence i was 9 when i got depression and even though its not the kinda i really write it ment a lot to me i translated it into my life and thats what i like about it the story withen it can be changed but still kinda has the same meaning good job 100\5!!! lol

This is very good! 5/5
Keep writing! i really enjoyed this!!
symbolism is def. not the easiest way to write yet you did awesome!

Wow this is great And i love the metaphors.... wow your a great writer and you kept me reading.. you have great flow and great wording!!!

I love this poem!! i don't know if you've seen or know of it but my fav movie is phantom of the opera and this poem reminds me of it. lol a masquerade to me is the different personalities people go through life. everyone is a different mask and although they are different there is something quite similar about them. nice work!!
bec xox

Different day, same mask. same person, different mask...great poem