Comments : When I Go I Will Forget Everything About You

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. Wonderfully written. Rhyming was excellent and everything flowed very well. I love how you put the title in the last line, I always like when poets do that.

    "A clean break was what I was hoping for;
    I couldn't hold onto these feelings anymore."

    I'm in love with those lines, an excellent beginning.

    Keep it up && Take Care

    -Shannon <3