Wow... This is one of the most powerful poems I've read in a while. It is excellently written from the beginning to the end and it kept my attention through every amazing line. Whole piece is endlessly vivid and emotions inside are expressed superbly.
I can't choose my favorite part because whole poem is truly mind- blowing.
You have a way with word, truly great talent and you should keep writing poetry :)
Excellently done, I enjoyed very much.