Hey FakeSmile,

This poem was rated 4/5. It needed a few more details. In one part you are talking about this friend in past tense, then in comes back to the present. It was good, but somewhat confusing. =] And I liked the part when it says people keep telling you to stop writing but you say, "No."! That's so me. =] Obviously, it's you, too! Well yes, this poem is good. =]

- Manda

I loved this poem.. It shows hhow much u love you friend.. I wish that I could sometime forget what my friend did to me. You see we used to be best friends, almost like sisters, but the she screwed everything up, and even though now were best friends again, I still can't forget the time she made my life hell..

Aww that's sweet. Great job. 5/5
-vino

Very well writen you did a good job 5/5

Awesome poem..itz so emotional n thnx a ton 4 ur comments on my poem..
hope u read da rest also!

Awwh, this poem is really sweet :)
it made me want to call all my friends and tell them i love them
good job :)

Very touching :)

Very touching :)