Comments : Our Place

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh my I just loved this! The warmth you described and the imagery you used was just beautiful. The flow was flawless and your words took me to another place. The whole mood of the poem was peaceful and put me into a better mood, truly made me smile. I could relate to the notion of being safe in his arms ... loved it.

    Beautifully done. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Charlie

    Wow this poems really sweet and inspirational! love it! X

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm i guess so..u had really express very well.. and u had a great imagery portraying about ur place.. great descirption though 5/5