Thats soo powerful!! well done xx

O wow really strong.
I liked it tho

Wow!! This is so great- Perfectly writen great wording you paint a picture with your word so far my favorite poem GREAT GREAT job!!!

That was a powerful poem. I know that feeling. Great way to put it in words.

Ohh my god.
i love it.
but it's sad=(
but i still love it! it's beautiful!
<3

Great poem, i really enjoyed it. well written and full of deep emotion