Nice poem, has a great message inside. Loved the way you presented it.

all the best and take care

It is a wonderful poem...
i surely know how it is hard to stand tall...
and how it is too easy to give up everything...
i respect the feeling in your poem and i wished we all could have this strenght...
*take care*
isabel

This sorta sounds like a song Ive heard before... but good nonetheless. Wish I knew who this was directed towards.