Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. The emotion in this was great, and the flow fit just right. It's short and simple, the way I usually write poems. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Amazing piece, filled with heartfelt emotions. I can relate to this in a way. Whole poem is excellently written and I could feel your emotions while I was reading it. It has fantastic flow from the beginning to the end.
I like the choice of words and very vivid and intense imagery that you created.

Keep writing!
5/5 from me

A great poem. the emotions were portrayed
very nicely. and this is a very nice piece and
i like it alot. :] something about this poem
really just. .gets to me. [but in a good way]
:] a great write. 5/5.

This is just so easy to relate to...
scars are made of memories that hurt too much...that you can't stand in your mind...
and no one else seems to understand...
this is quite a sad and dark poem, but it is amazing...=)
*take care*
isabel

Very good write. I liked everything about it. I think that it was perfecty written. The fact that you used simple vocabulary but showed a complex situation really stood out for me. The emtion was there also. Very good =} 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Love it. especially the ending.
nice job
xx

5/5

Ooh...kinda creepy. Gave me the chills. I can visualize it. For such a short poem, there is tons of emotion yet it is simply stated. The mix does wonders for it. And then the ending, well, its a twist thats so unexpected and so powerful your left awe struck for a moment as you think it over. Good job.