Wow, can I relate to everythng you just said. A beautiful write hun. Your flow was smooth throughout the whole peice and your rhyme was consistant. I loved it. Great job again!
5.5

Amber :]]

This is a great poem, but i only got one problem with it and for this i hope that you dont get upset.... Ok in the 3rd stanza you put "I don't want to hold you again" but in the last stanza you put "I wish you would hold me once more". Thats kind doenst make any sense, but other that that the poem is great.. 5/5