Nitin
I love this piece you have written. Such convictons of your feelings.

While sleeping with air I realized
My feelings will reach the end of sky
Just listen to what wind has to say
Touch every drop of rain when I cry

I love the metaphors of nature within. This stanza really touched me.
Great job on the challenge.
Love Cindy

Each word is so true, a very beautiful and inspirational poem, brought smile. :)
Great job a very unique poem you have shared with us.Thank you.

Chavii.

Chavii.

Sweet Nitin,

I love this poem, it has dept and beauty.
About scars...I think a heart that has sustained many injuries and wears the scars that are inevitable knows how to love better than a heart that is afraid to give itself.

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

I like how you encorparated the moon and the rain in with your emotions and beliefs of life, this si a great deeply penned poem, portrayed wonderfully xox sam

In the land of philosophers,i'm called a preacher....In the land of thinkers,i'm called a thought...In the land of dreamers,i'm called a dream...In the land of sinners,i'm called a sin....And in the land of lovers,i'm called love....Anything and Everything in this world is inspirational except for we humans...isnt it ? Many may not agree but then life is like a two sided coin,which one not willing to see the face of other....

Wish you a happy and prosperous new year...take care and keep smiling always....

I really like this poem of yours. I truely like the lines....

Even the darkness could be survived
If you let your eyes appreciate beauty

You see, I'm in that darkness right now... I can only hope that I find a way out sometime.

This is amazing
You are a very talented writer
keep it up :)
5/5

Good message.
Good voice.

You have a true talent very nice anyone can truly relate =]

Great poem, very good choice in words; I just love it
:)
5/5

Amazing poem. loved the repition, message, flow, and imagery! truly wonderful poem (and the picture for ur profile is ADORABLE)

Wow... when was the last time I've heard you saying something like this.... uummmm cant think of it. lol.... Great poem, whats even greater is that its coming from you. Its been ages since I've been here, but I'm glad I got to read this one. Keep your faith... always.

May be you are the best poet of this site. Your writing is so flawless. I'm not only amazed but also inspired. Lovely work.