Wow this a scary/deep/very emotional poem but what i like about is how the girl/boy says that "can not love
with so much blood, i shall always rise above
will not, can not..no not ever...
Til
i have hit the right exact SPOT" i was like damn you would think that they'll give up they saying hopeful next time would be the last time.Very different but i love it Gilr yes!! keep writing!!

Excellent in every sense of the word you are for real

Very good poem,good images,and flow,really awsome work!

Very moving poem a fav of mine

Another great poem from a great poet

I agree with elwood!

So great

So touching and descriptive. 5/5