Comments : I cant

  • 16 years ago

    by haunted

    Ooh!!!
    This is one of my favorites!!!!!
    I liked the way you said that you couldn't step back and fade!!!!!!
    OMFG I love your poems!!!!
    Haha.
    But I really do!!!!!
    Kono ii desu ne ....

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    Wow great read! i really like how you set it up too! amazing poem. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    Your work is amazing--i especially liked this one...you showed you! I like when i can read something and see the one writing it

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Awww. i love this poem. so full of emotion, power, meaning, depth. it was beautifully writtenn.
    --lovedroughtmelody

  • 9 years ago

    by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX

    I'll tell you who you are and who you were. :) I love this one too. I feel maybe these old poems are about us haha without knowing.