Oh.. wow.. this is such a good poem. One of my favorites. 5/5

Thanks, means a lot

Really good, and so true

Wow that was...beautiful. The feeling of its pain yet struggle shined through wonderfully. i loved it!
-Kissofthewind

Wow its a really powerful poem. the words have so much emotion behind them. its super sad too tho. good job! :)

Wow great poem 5/5