Wow, this is good, but u know i'd die if u died, reme. i luv u, but this is really good

That is fantastic sad but good structure

Such power behind the words. Exquisite! I love it! <3
5/5

~Ally

This has a lot of power wen the right people read it.. :)
loved it.
5/5
plz return the favor

OMG! this was extremely good. I felt grabbed by the powerful words. Another wonderful poem. keep it up. 5/5
kat