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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwz very sad poem....but very well written!!!! it had great flow!!! keep it up.....and u deserve anothen 5/5!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by kati

    This is great!! it flowed and it had a lot of meaning...5/5

  • Wow, this left me speechless.
    The flow was amazing and the words you used were just perfect.
    It sucks to be left without inspiration to write about.

    "A poet with blank inspiration in his heart
    His heart has gone through different part
    Lonely poet who doesn't know where to start
    He's been trying so hard to have a deal with art"

    ^This was my fav!
    Great job!
    5/5

    *Cindy*

  • I liked the 1st stanza most of all but the whole thing is good. You have a lot of talent. Continue writing and you'll be a jedi poet one day. LOL ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    Haha this is great. I know what you mean when inspiration is nowhere to be found. But you used that exact thing to inspire youself. Fantastic job :)

    Ally. x