Comments : Bucket Of Flowers

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw this is such a sweet and beautiful poem
    I really enjoyed this one. I really liked
    how you use "bucket of flowers" in the first line of every stanza to start it off.
    but i found one error
    -A bucket of flowers will always there to wait
    would it be: A bucket of flowers will always BE there to wait?

    5/5
    <3Tay

  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    This is amazing. I've never seen one like this either, and you wrote it very uniquely. It has a great idea behind it.

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    I like this poem, a lot. I love the way you used the flower's in this piece. It is so deep and heart-felt, im sure that anyone can take this and turn in into something that they can relate to, i know that i can. I know that you were trying to rhyme every line, but sometimes i think that it just didn't work. But it is a very hard thing to do, and i think that its okay.. just not to its full potential. Keep it up! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wonderful poem...beautifully written and completely flawless... i loved it... its interesting how you took such simple words and made them stand out... great job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by chicago

    Whats up man i really like it so keep it up