This is quite a poem. i feel sorry for you. even you need help with your dream. lol im sorry for your situation. i understand your situation by your poem. excellent poem. keep on writing. what is your dream if i my ask?

That was a very meaningful poem and it really made me think and alot of the time i feel like that too. i especially could relate to where you said "And I only started realising I was lonely,When I cried and no one was there." very good 5/5!

This poem is amazingg.
i can relate to it like no other.
my dad left my mom when she was pregnant.
and recently got kicked out
[but i'm back, blahh.]
because my mom was piss ass drunk..
but this poem is the extremely good.
keep it upp. ( :

muchlove.
stacyy.

I really like your poem. i relate to a lot of what you poem says. great job. keep up the wonderful work!

I love this poem, love how u worded it! its amazing! keep up the great work. 5/5
thnx 4 commentin mine,
love love xx

I love this poem, it's got a real meaning behind it and people can relate to how you feel..x