The message of this poem was great and its seems there are some few words that it was really sweet and very interesting,, but though its a bit off and hope u can make better.. 4/7

Another great poem....and i could feel the emotion in it.......it also had great flow to it!!! keep it up!

<3 i love you silly

This is a very lovely poem i really liked it alot.
i noticed you spelt the word scared wrong in your poem then there was another line before that

"It is just not that easy for me to let me guard down"

should be
"It is just not that easy for me to let my guard down"
not to let me guard down :D

other then that great job.
keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I loved it! The first line just captured me and I was hooked from then to the end. The second to last stanza was just beautiful. I loved the imagery and you took such a overused topic and made it your own which was amazing. Beautiful poem you penned here dear. *5/5*