I <3 it.

It's true. Nevva` make anyonre - your E V E R Y T H I N G..

5/5
=]

I didn't know what to expect when I read the first line of your poem... i was surprised. This seems more of a speech or even a letter. Overall I was very impressed with it. Good Job.

There is one thing that i didn't like about it and it bothers me with a lot of poetry on here...please use proper English, use Your not UR...etc.

Like I said overall its a very good piece of work. Keep it up.

I truely like this, I can completely understand the point you are giving in this. One thing that bugged me was how you had all those ................. after every line practically, it just kinda took me outta the depth that I could have felt while reading it. Amazing though, keep it up :D

Wow! :( buh its dha truth :\ nice poem though ;)

Wow! :( buh its dha truth :\ nice poem though ;)

Wow that is amazing.. that is exactly how I've been feeling since May

I like this.
its kind of how i feel right now.
[ps- the ....'s are kind of distracting. and you change a lot from "you" to "u" and "your" to "ur". its ok if u want to write in slang, but pick one or the other]

Very True...
I Can Relate Once Again,
5/5
-Ally