Wonderful poem
keep writting

Wow... The ending is simply heartbreaking. You managed to express emotions flawlessly, I could actually feel evrything that you expressed through the entire piece. Amazing poem, one of the best friendship pieces I read in a while. Happiness and sorrow mix to create deeply touching medley. I can't express how much I like this poem.
I can relate to this piece which made it even more heartfelt for me.
The firs stanza is my favorite, and fantastic ending of course.
You should be proud on this poem!
Keep writing

This is amazing!! The entire poem is very heartfelt and touching.. very very nice job.. and of course the ending - just makes the poem that much more powerful. I loved the ending and enjoyed the entire poem! Excellent job! Keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

Lovely
easily I can relate
your poems are very close to home for me
your style is really cool and similar to my own
this poem had a nice rhythm to it
the vocab and imagery was good
I loved this
5/5
kaila