Thats such heart warming love poem, almost like song.One of those first innocent love we nurture forever inside.A superb piece ,really enjoyed reading it.

love
chavii.

Tis a great poem cindy, love these styles, the flow tis perfect and the structure tis flawless!!! 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!!

This is one of the best from your collection for sure, i so very much love such poems. Powerful imagination and such great use of words...this is just beautiful

The wind is blowing through the trees
Whispering come and follow me
Where only joy and love abound
Happy laughter the only sound
Take my hand and you will see

just perfect start

all the best and take care

Hand in hand traveling streets of gold
Forever your love I will hold
Turning our faces towards the sun
Once again we become one
Our future now has been fortold
The wind is blowing

Such beautiful words.....
I loved this one, Cindy
You never cease to amaze me with your magnificent poetry.

Love you,

5/5 Ingrid

So beautiful I loved it.

Very well done on the form Cindy....love the content and the hidden meaning.....

Well done.. I love it

I really lyk ur poem and i find it enteresting how the french method works!!

This was beautiful, taking you a land of enchantment.
Great poem and I wish you the best this year.
Take care

Great poem and all but may i just say... you messed up, your stanzas are off... the second one is aaaR. sky fly I they all ryme... good job anyways!!!

Wow that is so creative and you can hear where the rhymes are and it sounds so wondeful all put together, you are an artist of words cindy xox sam

This is good....

Question you seem to know quite a bit, so if you dont mind me asking. Should a poem flow well and rhyme, or can you write a story that doesn't and call it a poem?

your poems are beautiful 5/5