Nice i love it

I love ur twist endings! u always have the perfect 1s. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

Very nicely written. I enjoyed the vision it showed as I read to myself. Keep it up. 5/5

CTM

I love this poem </3

Nice, nice.
I do enjoy life as a metaphorical dance. It makes things seem much more...symphonic.
Keep writing. You're good but you're no cummings.

Awww this one is sad. its all a dream!!! cool twist!! :):)

That was a good poem. I liked how it all went together. =) thanks for your comment too.
You are a talented one.
better than I haha.

This is great! -two thumbs up-
:)

I adore this writing of yours.
very touching and inspiring.

Thats so sad! that something that makes you happy turns out to be a dream....4/5

Thanx so much for commenting on one of my poems. i loved tihs! two thumbs up! xoxox