This is Jules...I thought I would read some of your stuff.

My fav lines are -
I'm more than willing to take your abuse
So long as it's something you don't just excuse
and
And it's so unfair to have the key and no access -

I really like the frustration you demonstrate here. It's truly heart-wrenching. And the way you write is easy to understand. It's a deep subject so that's usually hard to accomplish but you did it very well. Very talented. Keep it up. 5/5 for sure! :)
~Jules (Midnight Sun)