Comments : To Exist

  • 16 years ago

    by Connie

    Boy this really made me stop and think! The 5th stanza really says it all!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    I get the feeling that you are one of those people who can sit down and effortlessly spill out something beautiful. And that's amazing. You have a way with words that hooked me right from the beginning, and I don't need to be a religious person to appreciate this.

    The fifth stanza really stood out (and I see the person above agrees with me). I also particularly liked the second stanza, because I feel that every single person who reads this will feel that they can relate to it.

    I would suggest adding punctuation, because I always feel I should suggest adding it if it isn't there. Keep up the great work, I truly enjoyed this read.