Hey that was a poem.......... umm.. keep it up!!

Hey sweety, nice work. very relatable, LOVE IT

Wow so much pain in that poem that come from love i love it lmao

Cool poem. but sad. ya got some spelling errors too, but its alright.

Love really does kill us slowly, as much as we wanna say it makes us live. beautiful poem, you caught it. go back and fine tune it tho! it's got some spellin errors that are kinda distractin... <3