:o. a very sad piece. emotional.
[the emotion was portrayed very well]
and the flow was simply flawless.
an amazing write, i would say. 5/5.

Wow.. I haven't seen a poem this good in a long time. The title alone captured my attention, but my goodness, the poem itself captured my heart. I cannot relate to this personally, but I'm sure many teenagers out there will be able to. It was a painfully wonderful piece, dear. Keep it up. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~