I liked it very well how the picture was set in my mind... I could imagine exactly what you were saying
Although some words were repeated to often loosing the ryhtm of the poem in a total.

Thanks for comenting on mine
Alex
4/5

Wow i like it alot...i can really relate to this poem....me and my boyfriend are the same way...keep up the good work....5/5

Thanks for your comment
this is a very sweet passionate poem
keep up the good work
:)

5/5.

Your poems are so detailed, and I can't help but read them again and again.

Everyone has their own nitch in writing, and I think you found it.

Don't stop writing.