WOW this was touching.....i mean truly amazing it made me want to cry ilove it your going on my favorites you should comment my poems

Wow, such a power ful poem and makes u feel so many emotions on a very seirous topic. keep it up! 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

One word, -amazing!- It was great, the story, the rhyming, the flow... amazing. And the topic is just so true. Keeo up the great writing..and thanks for your comment=]

-That Girl

AKA Court

Ok i know ive commented this one already..but i read it again forgetting that i had. and i just wanted to let u know I love it just as much and if not more than i did the first time!!

Why have i not read any of these??

this one is...actually, amazing. especially for an older poem from you jesse...because they get better...but those last two lines are haunting. and it's jst amazing...really. great.

((i hate how even when you weren't like you are now, you were amazing))