Great write..lonely?..i know how you feel..it sucks..but i hear it's all worth it in the end..hopefully that's true..love the poem! <3

Well writen,sorry your lonley but you'll find somone.

This was deep... Loneliness, so frightening and painful... But, don’t worry, as soon as it comes, it will go... Or so I wish for both of us.
Anyway, great poem, keep it up!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

This is very well writen shows alot of emotion...good job 5/5

Really good poem. It expressed feeling in detail. And it had a great flow. Great job. 5/5

I really enjoyed this poem
It has beautiful expression and meaning in it and really made me feel like thats how it would be to have your lover not there by your side.

"get home hoping to change the tides
you listen to your messages no one has left
missing the voice that your warm heart felt"

I really enjoyed that line. So sad and wistful.

overall a really good poem. Good work.
^_^

Aww, what a sad poem you have written!
Were your really that alone?
I like the style, so...you keep writing too:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Too sad :( Jk it was really sad but I loved it!
Lots of emotion, can feel the loneliness throughout. I hope things get better for you and there is a change. Great Job :) 5/5