Comments : First Time

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Aww puppy love. lol. i miss back in the day when that feeling was new to me. good poem. i like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Great poem.
    cute and sweet and again, beautiful.
    i really like it.
    especially the ending. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I love the 3rd and 4th stanzas its kinda sweet and sincerely expressed the emotions very well. perfectly ended very great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Nice job... i think that you could have made this a big deeper with stronger emotions but still it was an enjoyable read