Ok great job but a 4\5 because too lines are not very good, this is my advice so you dont have to agree but the line "Like a doll on the shelf falling,
Why am I always falling?" i think it should be im like a doll falling off a shelf, buti dont know why i keep on falling, or something like that, and the line "My heart has been stabbed
And stabbed again. " i think it should be my heart has been stabbed over and over again" but this is my advice i think it would improve the poem. but great job!!

Great job!! i really like this poem.. and i think anyone can relate to it...