Comments : What We Forbade

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow :) I have to say this is defintely my favorite stanza

    What we are,
    Is fading away again,
    What we have become,
    Is just going too far,
    I live off the affliction,
    And blessings in the cell,
    I need a cure for this,
    Disease before I,
    Fall to you as well.

    Awesome job. Defintely thought provoking and a refreshing read. I probably repeat myself in these comments, but I just LOVE your word use, it's not of your ordinary everyday poems. :) Just an amazing write overall

    Ja! Haha. Okay, so I've been wondering this. What is up with your name Schemilix.. intriguing.

    xD

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.